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At the
beginning of the pandemic, a friend posted on her Facebook page a funny video
of a thirteen-year-old Schnauzer giving advice to the two-legged from the four-legged.
The advice included everything from wearing button pants to chilling out at
home and wandering around and playing with the tennis balls.
https://youtu.be/XYWrjjwDeiA
I
immediately started following Pluto’s Facebook page and was hooked with the weekly
videos that doled out advice on everything from keeping your nose on your own
face to telling the two legged to “Stay home. Stay!”
It has been weekly entertainment listening as Pluto gives advice
with her own dog language and ways of speaking. Pluto also gives me ideas for
how to craft a book I am currently writing from the point of view of my
nine-year-old, black and tan cocker spaniel, Stormy.
My work-in-progress, “The World is a Sniff” tells the story of our
training to be a reading dog team, failing the test, and finding our home on the
Oregon Coast.
In order to help me develop Stormy's voice, I created a Twitter account here:
https://twitter.com/stormyspaniel
He loves
new followers--dog or human!
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On our daily walks, Stormy and I often see elk in the
park, sand
dunes and beach. Sometimes the elk are right outside our door.
The following story is part of my book in progress and is told
from Stormy’s point of view. I hope you enjoy it!
Fall on the Coast: A Dog’s View
In the
middle of the night, I smell them. The dark and dank scent. I cuddle against my
Human in the pillows and covers. I lift my head and stare toward the bedroom
window. They are out there. The creatures who smell.
Elk.
I bury my
nose against my Human and I only smell her.
In her
sleepy state, she pets me. “Shhh…Stormy,” she says my name. “It’s okay.” I
snuggle closer to her.
In the morning, I leap out of bed. I
retrieve my Human’s slippers and she serves my breakfast. My Human and I meet
up with my dog pals on the coffee shop porch. Muffin and bagel crumbs land on
the floor. My dog pals and I bump against each other in the dash for crumbs
under the tables.
After coffee, my Human works on her
computer and I snuggle beside her on the chair. After a while, I get bored. I
use my best pleading whine and she clips on my leash. On our walk, I smell the
dank and dark creatures. They are at the top of our hill. I lunge toward
them. Most turn away but one stares at
me. Slowly, it takes a step toward me.
My Human
tightens my leash. We run down the hill to the park. The scent of elk is all
around us.
We pass by
the creek. When we are far enough onto the beach, my Human slips off my leash.
She throws my ball and my feet dance on the sand. When I get tired, we walk
home. The dank, dark smell is gone.
That
afternoon, the man in the big truck comes to the door. He hands my Human a box
and like always, there is a treat for me. I wiggle and wiggle. I love
the man in the big truck.
After
dinner, my Human and I meet my dog pals at the end of the street for a beach
walk. I am not as fast as I once was, and two beach walks a day is a lot for me
now. My dog pals try to get me to play chase, but I can’t always keep up.
Beach
walking Humans always have treats. I like to walk by their sides. I whine a
little until a treat finds its way out of a bag and into my mouth. Getting old
on the beach isn’t so bad.
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After the
sun sets, Humans and dogs walk down the hill.
I smell
them again.
The dark,
dank creatures.
They are
close.
Very close.
One of my
dog pals is off leash. She dashes into the trees. The twigs snap. The dark,
dank creatures are everywhere. My dog pal barks at them. She barks and barks.
Her Human
calls to her. But she doesn’t come.
The elk
lifts his leg to smoosh my dog pal.
The Humans
all go silent.
I smell it.
Fear.
And, then,
I hear.
My Human is
calling. A high-pitched voice that she learned at our puppy training classes.
The Trainor Human told her to use that call if I ever ran into the road. She
told her I would stop and come back immediately.
It works
for elk too.
Suddenly,
my dog pal runs out of the bushes and toward the Humans.
The dark,
dank creatures clomp into the woods. Their scent lingers in the air.
I am happy
to walk back to the cottage. At bedtime, I snuggle next to my Human.
Tonight,
the dark, dank creatures do not pass by my house.
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Animal stories make great picture book stories,
and I am teaching an online Writing the Picture Book class with WOW-Women on
Writing from January 5 to February 2.
You can find out more here: https://www.wow-womenonwriting.com/classroom/MindyHardwick_PictureBook.php
Mindy Hardwick is a published memoirist, romance and
children’s author. Her picture book, Finder’s Keepers, was published as a
digital picture book. Her children’s and YA books include: Weaving Magic, Seymour’s Secret,
and Stained Glass Summer. Mindy
facilitated a poetry workshop in a juvenile detention and wrote about the
experience in her memoir, Kids in Orange: Voices from Juvenile Detention. Mindy
teaches GED and Creative Writing at an online high school in the Portland,
Oregon area. When she’s not writing, Mindy can be found art journaling and
walking on the Oregon Coast beaches with her dog, Stormy.